Fist Fight

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West Fist Fight Directed by Richie Keen Written by Van Robichaux and Evan Susser It’s the last day of the school year and the seniors are cutting loose with every prank imaginable.  It doesn’t take long before the pranks aggravate the teachers so much that eventually pits two teachers against each other.  That is the premise of this film.  Two teachers fight after school.  Laughing yet?  I didn’t think so.  The screenplay writers seem to have a budding career on their hands with upcoming film work on “Wedding Crashers 2” and “Sonic the Hedgehog”.  Yet … Continue reading

John Wick 2

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West John Wick 2 Directed by Chad Stahelski Written by Derek Kolstad In the first John Wick film we get introduced to a retired hitman whom the criminal underworld knows as “Baba Yaga” aka “The Boogeyman”.  A man who embodies death itself.  This film brings back this retired hitman with more bullets and bad people to kill.  The action is well choreographed, and shot with a steady camera instead of the headache inducing shaky cams from most action flicks these days.  That are the highlights of this film, but the story suffers tremendously with the … Continue reading

Split

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West Split Directed by M Night Shyamalan Written by M Night Shyamalan M Night Shyamalan is notorious for his ‘twist endings’ and has had major success with films like The Sixth Sense, Signs, and Unbreakable.  The story is an interesting concept.  A man named Kevin with 23 personalities struggles with them as a 24th personality is coming to take control of them all.  Three teenage girls are kidnapped by one of the personalities and most reviews you will read focus on the one teen girl trying to manipulate the 23 personalities to helping her escape.  … Continue reading

Assassin’s Creed

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West Assassin’s Creed Directed by Justin Kurzel Written by Michael Lesslie, Adam Cooper and Bill Collage Video game movies often get a bad rap when it comes to getting a movie made.  Often you cannot please everyone.  Diehard fans want it just a certain way, and often studios are trying to net the widest audience possible with hopes of becoming a film franchise.  Assassin’s Creed is based upon a popular video game series, and with three writers on this project this film fails three times as much. This film is an original story that ‘fits’ … Continue reading

Collateral Beauty

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West Collateral Beauty Directed by David Frankel Written by Allan Loeb Why was this movie made and scheduled for a holiday release?  With a plot that if portrayed straightforward would be just an hour plus of crying, it tries to be uplifting, but instead still depresses you along the way even more. If you intend to write a depressing tear inducing drama, then write a depressing tear inducing drama.  If you intend to write something uplifting write that.  With this cast it is ridiculous that the script completely ruined this film.  Spoilers coming. The film … Continue reading

Rogue One: A Star Wars Story

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West Rogue One:  A Star Wars Story Directed by Gareth Edwards Written by Chris Weitz, Tony Gilroy, John Knoll, Gary Whitta I am usually one to say film should NOT be split into two films just for sake of profits, and this is just the case for films based upon bestselling books like Lord of the Rings, and Harry Potter.  Yet for this film it actually, and honestly needed a second film to expand upon character development.  With two screenplay and two story writers combined, and the news of reshoots and re-edits of this film … Continue reading

Office Christmas Party

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West Office Christmas Party Directed by Josh Gordon, Will Speck Written by Laura Solon, Justin Malen, Dan Mazer, Jon Lucas, Scott Moore, and Timothy Dowling With a great cast of very funny people like Jason Bateman, Olivia Munn, Jennifer Aniston, TJ Miller, Kate McKinnon, and Rob Corddry there should be plenty of room for the writers to really serve up the laughs.  Yet comedy is hard.  Even with a great comedic cast, six writers, and two directors this film ends up as many films do with the best parts being in the trailer.  Sad indeed … Continue reading

Bad Santa 2

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West Bad Santa 2 Directed by Mark Waters Written by Doug Ellin, Shauna Cross, Johnny Rosenthal, John Phillips Edmund Kean’s famous quote, “Dying is easy.  Comedy is hard.”  Is true today as it was in his day.    With four writers on this project from hit shows like Entourage to raunchy comedies like Dirty Grandpa, you would think this one would be a sure fire laugh riot.  Well it unfortunately isn’t.  All jokes aside, this films feels like it had a identity crisis.  Torn between being a hard R comedy to a family drama.  Trying … Continue reading

Doctor Strange

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West Doctor Strange Directed by Scott Derrickson Written by Jon Spaihts, Scott Derrickson, C. Robert Cargill Marvel, Marvel, Marvel…when will you break the forgettable villain curse? Zero character development for the villain, Kaecilius, and even less motivation for what his character does in the film.  Although the visuals alone is worth the price of admission (especially in 3D), the story suffers from the lack of respect for what could have been a great villain.  Mads Mikklesen is a splendid actor and it is not his fault that three writers couldn’t give his character meaning.  So … Continue reading

Allied

Writing Movie “WRONGS” By Jim West Allied Directed by Robert Zemeckis Written by Steven Knight Robert Zemeckis has a great resume of films under his belt.  Back to the Future, Forest Gump, and even had moderate success in the horror genre.  Yet it is drama that his name invokes thoughts of so when Allied featured a trailer that shows Allied as a dramatic thriller I figure this may be something worth watching as he has mastered both.  I was completely wrong on both fronts of drama and thriller.  With a single writer for the screenplay, I will assume this is … Continue reading